is this a school paper or what?
if so, not bad i would say.
but then, my powers of literary analysis aren't all that great. so don't attach too much importance to my words!
you need to fix/improve some phrases which are improperly worded (IMO of course) and like i said some typos and grammatical erros (incorrectly constructed sentences).
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the land of Mordor, where the Shadows lie
M.C. Escher - Reptilien